You did a great job on this!
I gotta say, I love the shading so much I think I'm emotionally attached to it.
I don't really see any problems with this amazing masterpiece! But I felt like you could have added a bit more detail to the hair and the face and probably a little more folds and wrinkles to the outfit. no worries though! still looks pretty badass.
the sword looks amazing and so does the outfit! now I want to start watching Sword Art Online
I'm so sorry for this terrible critique! >///< I don't often write them. I don't have much to say but this is amazing and has very high quality.